Your thoughts on a potential Add mock up

[imported_Grouse]

What do you guys think of this? It is a 1/6th page ad in black and white. THe cost of the ad, and the advertising are reasonable. It allows me to talk about my buisness on the local forum. The pic is a car i prepped for HIN.



here is the add.

This is only a mock up as the desiner was waiting on the full resolution original image.

 

[imported_CkretAjint]

I think the image of the car itself is to flat. It just looks like a lot of light glaring off a black car. It needs more depth. Might i suggest a silver car, there is alot of contrast with that color. The light and the darks really would make it pop on a dark BG. You lines of text (1-4) should NOT be the same size as your logo above it. If you are using your logo as the headline, make sure that is it larger (2-4 pts) then the copy on the card.



Dont forget to add your contact information as well. That is the MOST important thing!

 

[Envious Eric]

yeah the black and white/greyscale doesnt really appeal to me....

 

[imported_Grouse]

Nothing i can do about that it is a greyscale ad