OCDetails Site Rebuild (finally)

Jngrbrdman

Jngrbrdman

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Ok, it is still a work in progress, but I am going to get this thing put to bed before the end of the year for sure. I've got all my ducks in a row and now it is just a matter of plopping the text down and making sure I'm staying consistent.

OCDetails Rebuild Site

Any feedback and comments are more than welcome at this early stage of development. I'm trying to design it to make it easy for upgrades and updates in the future. The old format was way cumbersome to update and that is why it is so out of date right now. One thing I can say is that the galleries are going to be awesome! ;) Two words... Adobe Lightroom. It makes the best galleries evaaaar! I just need to decide if I'm going to integrate the galleries into the format it is in right now or just have it open in different pages.
 
I was only able to access two items on your linked page. Enjoyed the text very much. It was an easy read. Some word errors were noted when I read it.

i.e. "gained popular" mite read "grew popular" or "gained popularity" could be another way to phrase it.

Good luck in the completion of this work. Will look forward to the final read.
 
Yeah, it isn't done yet. You are only going to see the pages that are complete and linked. I still haven't even done a proof reading on it yet, so I appreciate the verbiage tip. :)
 
Jngrbrdman said:
Yeah, it isn't done yet. You are only going to see the pages that are complete and linked. I still haven't even done a proof reading on it yet, so I appreciate the verbiage tip. :)
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I have been taking a writing class and I know that I miss many errors when I proof read my own writing. I truly was trying to help rather than being nitpicky.
 
If you want the job of proof reading it for me and doing your nitpicky thing, then you are more than welcome. I've never been short on words, but my formal education is in the law and lawyers have no idea how to write in anything other than leagalese. lol You'd think someone who made a living briefing cases would be better at getting to the point, eh? lol
 
LOL!! I certainly am not looking for a job. BUT...you did ask for comments. So I made a comment.
 
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