New Business Card

[randomman84]

What does everyone think about this business card? Will it work?

Is it simple to read and look professional?

Ideas? Advice? Suggestions?

Any help would be greatly appreciated...

Thanx

 

[Corey Bit Spank]

blurt out your info please

 

[randomman84]

oops sorry, fixed..

 

[Bill D]

Also, cross posting is not allowed. I deleted the duplicate. Threads like these belong in Professional Detailers. I moved it here.

 

[randomman84]

Sorry, i apologize.

 

[Black240SX]

Hmm, maybe try it with a less stylized font.

 

[randomman84]

which one, the first font or the second, i figured the stylized font gave off a professional look.

 

[Black240SX]

The top three lines. A more plain font would be easier to read.

 

[randomman84]

ok ill look into that, and see if i cant change it to be something simpler on the eyes

 

[joburnet]

If your going to get these printed then I would suggest using the back of your card as well.

 

[randomman84]

ok i was planning on using the back of the card as a 15% discount card... works?

 

[imported_dl9589]

It's a bit dark, and hard to read.

 

[zainoshine]

Your website doesn't work.



Just some ideas~Try spelling out "Five," it looks nicer.



The First line, Fiver Star Detailing, looks nice in that font. The two lines underneath it would look better in a non-italic, simpler font.

 

[Scottwax]

ok i was planning on using the back of the card as a 15% discount card... works?

I'd do that if you make it a multi-vehicle discount.



I think a silver background with a similarly shiny black car would also look good.

 

[joburnet]

multi-vehicle discounts have worked well for me. I do a buy one get one 50% off and have had a lot of people jump on it.

 

[randomman84]

thanx for all the replies, keep them coming im gonna go work on it now. Thanx!

 

[jimmy]

This is mine. I like it :bow

 

[imported_imolamystique]

What does everyone think about this business card? Will it work?

Is it simple to read and look professional?

Ideas? Advice? Suggestions?

Any help would be greatly appreciated...

Thanx

Your card has the same background as mine. Yours looks alot darker though. Did you design online at the GreatFX Business Cards website?



I posted an image of my cards in another thread.



Their cards are great because of the heavy stock and high gloss finish. Look around via a search for a discount code.