need some critics.....

Very nice! However, I'd go with one of the logos on the top and center it under the name (preferably one of the two on the left).



Just my .02
 
Can ya'll tell me if this is good?



Ox Auto Detail.



Alot of people at school call me ox and sam's auto dedtail is taken...
 
samiam513 said:
Can ya'll tell me if this is good?



Ox Auto Detail.



Alot of people at school call me ox and sam's auto dedtail is taken...
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hahaha Ox Auto Detail - I can clean your car, even if its the size of an Ox! :p :D it works





or how about "Sam's Supendous Shiners" (or would that sound too much like you get beat up alot/beat people up alot??) :cool:
 
hope you dont mind...



but I find the second item quite confusing (especially for the average beginner)



Buffing of surface defects to either remove or greatly reduce their appearance.



Maybe



Removal or reduction of surface paint defects through buffing would be better?



Just some suggestions...



Very catchy banner... :)
 
Some suggestions to mess around with a Great flyer...



Maybe spread the pictures around the text so they are not clumped together at the top.



How about replacing "Call for price and availability - Fee Quotes" to "Free quotes - Make your appointment by calling ***-***-****"







:bounce
 
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