Need Help with my New Add

yes looking good indeeed. but yea maybe put another picture in there to fill up some more space....

but other then that looks good.
 
maximv1 said:
hey greg, just an idea. what if you centered the text of the packages on the page. i think it would look more streamlined. do you find your silver package sells the best. my high and low end packs don't seem to sell as well as the middle. your ad looks very professional.
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yes the silver is the biggest seller. that is my middle package. I only have one customer that does the gold. As for the bronze i havent really had any customers on that. They just run it through the swirl o matic when they want to.

Greg
 
Greg,

A few thoughts on the visual of your ad . . .
Move the Bronze Package 1/2 inch to the left
Leave the Silver Package where it is
Move the Gold Package 1/2 inch to the right
This will draw the eye down & to the right like this \

Also if you can, move the first block of text (Pinnacle Detailing, etc) up 1/2 inch, and the bottom block (All prices, etc) down 1/2 inch. That will put the white space where I think it would look better and draw attention to the areas you want emphasized.

And that should allow you to stretch the picture a little to fill some of the "white space" surrounding it. It could go 1/4 inch to the right, and you could also increase the font size of "Professional Detailing Services, etc. I think that adding a second picture would detract from the impact.

Please note that these measurements ARE approximate & are based on my assumption that it is a 8.5" x 11" flyer.

Looking forward to seeing your end result :)

Norah

PS - package arrived safely today, thanks :D
 
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