My card

shotime

Privitize it
Tell me what you think. I whipped this up in 5 min. It's just a generic card as I'm not 100% a legal business yet. By the way things are going now, I'm looking to go legit either the end of the summer or next year. This is to hold me over until then.
 
Looks very nice. :bigups One suggestion I have is to remove the "specializing in" part on it. You can't really specialize in everything. In law school and medical school you take classes covering just about everything in their respective fields. However, you usually only come out specializing in one of them. You have a general knowledge of the other areas, but your focus is on one part. Like you are a brain surgeon even though you took classes in pediatrics. Or you are a criminal defense attorney even though you took classes in family law.

The point is that unless you have just as much experience in airplane and boat detailing as you do in normal car detailing then you can't really throw the 'specializing' word in there. Its a little deceptive. Then again, maybe you do have just as much experience in all areas. If that is the case then I would change it to "expert" or "Specializing in car care for:" or something like that. Just a suggestion. The card looks very nice. :bigups
 
Nice looking card........one suggestion on top of what Jngr wrote......if you handed me your card I would ask if you had detailed the car on it?

Wouldn't look good if you didn't detail it. Would look great on you if you have detailed it.

Anthony
 
Anthony Orosco said:
Nice looking card........one suggestion on top of what Jngr wrote......if you handed me your card I would ask if you had detailed the car on it?

Wouldn't look good if you didn't detail it. Would look great on you if you have detailed it.

Anthony

It would be better to say: Of course, I own it. :cool
 
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