Hey folks,
I've been able to put my site online, and was seeking any constructive criticism. My goal was to assemble a simple page that is easy rear, follow, yet does not require any application(s) to load properly. Just a little something something to provide customers with a taste of what I am offering.
www.MichalskiDetailing.com
Nice start! Easy to read, easy to navigate.
I really like the top two images (right side), MB "before" and "after" but didn't see it on your Gallery page.
Idea for opening paragraph:
Thank You for visiting Michalski Detailing, dedicated to addressing all your car care detailing needs. We are conveniently located in Columbia (Northeast), South Carolina, between the Village at Sandhill and Lake Carolina.
Whether you are a car enthusiast or simply take pride in a clean ride, have Michalski Detailing make it look it's Best! I am extremely proud of the services we provide; given the opportunity to detail your vehicle, I am sure you will be delighted with the results.
You wrote:
"My goal is twofold - to make your car look like new and to help you maintain that condition."
Strong statement that will come back to bite you. Try:
"My goal is twofold - to make your car look the best possible (for the condition and services purchsed) and to help you maintain that condition."
You wrote:
"Please call Chris personally at the number posted above...""
Um, it's posted "below" not "above".
Regards,
GEWB