Help me decide on a business card

[2drtahoez71]

Well I got fed up with waiting for people to reply back to me about designing me a logo, so i went ahead and did it myself...which design do yall like the best?

Heres my original idea:

And what I ended up with:

Forgot to add the info to this one, but you get the idea:

 

[clean4u]

Looking good!!!!!!:beer

 

[freedre]

If you are not going to put a naked woman on it - go with your original idea. It looks smart and professional and not too 'uppity' (can't think of another word - but you get the idea).

I can't relate to a vehicle that has 'gull wing' doors. You must be going after clients too rich for my blood.

My $.02

Give some more thought to the naked lady idea.

 

[gentletouch]

Go with the green one

 

[Clean Dean]

I like the original... Just my $.02.

 

[probegt]

I think the original is the better. I looks clean and professional.

 

[bossplaya]

The original has a nice clean look.

 

[bigron62]

i vote for the original.. looks classy

 

[treestand]

I like this style the best... but I would change it a little bit (if it was me).

I would change the name "Ulitmate Detail" to the yellow color, and then change the bars on the sides to white. I would also leave the "The" as white. I think that keeps the whole name together better.

Also, im not sure why, but on the other card similar to this, you can see more of the letter "a". I think it is better this way. For someone who just sees the card and has no idea what you do, it might be a bit hard for them to read quickly.

 

[69 GTO Judge]

I like the original one. Very professional looking and would appeal to all levels of clientel.

 

[BaDm0theR]

I really like 'Treestands' suggestion too, that set-up would look great.

If you decide to keep the original, which by the way looks fantastic, id make the word 'Ultimate' larger and more legible (easier to read).

Goodluck and keep us posted!

 

[2drtahoez71]

Wow, you uys really like the original the best? I basically scapped that idea, and just put it in this thread for the hell of it.

What about the idea of maybe getting 1000 cards done, half the original, and half one of the other ones?

 

[groebuck]

My 02cents

Well I like the original cuz it looks cool but from a marketing stand point I would not use it - your logo it too small - looking at the card for a second or two I would guess it was a Mercedes salesman


I like the one below becuase the main focus is the word Ultimate and it draws your attention to your business name and not the vehicle on the card -

The car it cool looking without being an easy to idenfity brand so you don't look like a car salesman and your name, number, email addy are all easily readable down there in white....

okay it's more like my 10 cents --

 

[tom4444]

I also like the first one. The others may turn customers away because they might think you only detail really high-end cars(or just sport cars). And on the first one I would make the word "Ultimate" a little bigger and easier to read.

 

[jason rawls]

My vote is for this one:

 

[tcfool]

My vote is for this one:

Ditto

TC
:cool

 

[overtheedge]

I like this one...

and doesn't look like you needed any help with the graphics design....good job!

 

[freedre]

"I am ready to meet my Maker. Whether my Maker is prepared for the great ordeal of meeting me is another matter." - Sir Winston Churchill
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Winston Churchill wasn't a peer. His father, Randolph Churchill was a peer and entitled to the title "Sir Randolph Churchill". Son Winston, could as a courtesy, be called "Sir Winston" or "Sir Churchill", but never "Sir Winston Churchill".

I have way too much time on my hands.

 

[overtheedge]

"I am ready to meet my Maker. Whether my Maker is prepared for the great ordeal of meeting me is another matter." - Sir Winston Churchill
_______________________________________________________________________________

Winston Churchill wasn't a peer. His father, Randolph Churchill was a peer and entitled to the title "Sir Randolph Churchill". Son Winston, could as a courtesy, be called "Sir Winston" or "Sir Churchill", but never "Sir Winston Churchill".

I have way too much time on my hands.

Yeh. Copy and pasted from somewhere on the net....don't blame me.

 

[rollman]

I would have to pick your original card . It looks nicer, the car actually looks like it just got detailed, and it probably did. I also like the logo on the top left hand side card . The burst effect looks classy. Good luck

Jerry :cool