Greg Cavi's New Site

Greg, nice looking site. Looks like you have spent an awful lot of time on it. You might want to look at this page , as I think motorcycle (motercycle) is misspelled. I know it's a nitpicky thing, but it all counts. and with as nice as the site is, I am sure you could fix that right up. Very nice and professional looking site.
 
Looks really good Greg!
Not to be nit-picky but a few things you want to fix:
-You may want to fix the second sentence of the second paragraph on the homepage though, "size" and "condition" needs to be plural.
-In the "News" section under the referral section you forgot to capitalize Pinnacle just above the graphic.
-Under the "Why Detail" section remove the word faded from the second sentence, the second time it is used does not belong in there.
Other than those few typos the site is really great. I like the colors and font and it is really easy to navigate. For the record I had no problem with the speed of the site, everything seems to be loading automatically for me. Great Job and Good Luck! I wish I had the ambition to do something like that.
 
Thanks Guys! your gonna keep me busy tonight. Im off to the doctor now... sore throat so ill make changes when i return. Thanks again!

Greg
 
Jeez Greg, with all of these scrutinizing eyes you may want to run a message across the banner on the homepage, something along the lines of "Services temporarally unavailable due to asking a bunch of perfectionists how my website looks, I sould be up and running by September when everyone is finally happy" :rofl

Just kidding everyone, I am sure Greg apreciates the suggestions and comments but all of them comming so quickly is too funny.
 
I don't know which is worse... posting all the comments in the public forum so that it looks like the site is full of problems, or having 15 people all PM him the same suggestions. :lol For the record, other than some personal opinions that don't have anything to do with the functionality of the site, I think it looks really nice and professional. I forgot to add that you should put a counter on it so you can see how many hits you get.
 
The size looks nicely setup and very professional.
Only thing I would suggest is a font that is a little easier to read, but thats just a personal preference.
 
I was a little bit shocked to get like 10 pm's in a few minutes haha. I got them all responded to i think haha. I will tinker around tonight and make changes were changes need to be made. I will also add a counter.

Greg
 
Nice looking site Greg! I like the crawl on the page letting people know you are updating the site! Now, all you have to do is get the word out in your area so people can take a look at your site. Pictures go a long way IMO. I hope you get some good business from your hard work!

Mike

PS - Keep the rain down where you are, we're sick of it up here! ;)
 
MS22 said:
Jeez Greg, with all of these scrutinizing eyes you may want to run a message across the banner on the homepage, something along the lines of "Services temporarally unavailable due to asking a bunch of perfectionists how my website looks, I sould be up and running by September when everyone is finally happy" :rofl
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lol.. we are detailers arent we? :cool
 
Thanks for the kind words guys. And a big thanks to everyone who helped me with proofreading and suggestions. I got a 59/60 on it. I will go to my grave believing i earned a 60 though haha. I have updated my prices section so it flows and is easier to read.

Thanks

Greg
 
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