I like it.
I like the fact that its clean. People will spend more time on clean, easy to navigate websites with short, concise text.
Some people on this forum might shoot me for saying this guy's name, but I think that Paul Dalton's site is one of the best detailer's sites around. I especially like the way he describes his services and handles his FAQ page. Its not overly technical or too lengthy to discourage reading.
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Also, when putting pictures on your site, make sure they're super high quality. The better the picture looks, the better you look.
That's my two cents.
I think you're off to a great start. As long as you keep it simple and everything is grammatically sound, I think it'll be a killer site. Let us know when you get it up!