Evaluate This Business Card Please

i like the general layout but personaly i think the lettering is to hard o read quickly. and people are goign to glance qucikly and thast what you want. Also i would stick with the picture being whole im peersonaly noy a fan of the split up. looks to artistic for the card. Thats just my opion and im sorry if i offended neone but those are my thoughts
 
The "Wash and Wax" was not clear for me the first time. Because of the font the h is gone and I find that too complicated for a business card.

The thing that should be the most simple and straight out is the writing. You can go fancy on everything else.
 
CalgaryDetail said:
i like the general layout but personaly i think the lettering is to hard o read quickly. and people are goign to glance qucikly and thast what you want. Also i would stick with the picture being whole im peersonaly noy a fan of the split up. looks to artistic for the card. Thats just my opion and im sorry if i offended neone but those are my thoughts
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I agree. Overall the card is good, but those fonts have got to go, IMO. :boot
 
My thoughts are that you have to many things listed on the card.

Auto Detailing covers it all....anyone that is interested in getting their car done will understand the wash / wax, paint reconditioning and interior cleaned parts of the service


For me I wanted to keep the lettering simple and not list the services out...that's my view on it...Here is mine that I made on line at prints made easy
 
Thanks for the feedback guys. Beemerboy, you bring up good points. As everyone said, the font isn't the easiest to read, but I liked the edgy look so that's why I picked it. Definitely won't use it though. Oh, and thanks for posting your own personal examples. I appreciate everyone's candidness.:)
 
CARTfan said:
Thanks for the feedback guys. Beemerboy, you bring up good points. As everyone said, the font isn't the easiest to read, but I liked the edgy look so that's why I picked it. Definitely won't use it though. Oh, and thanks for posting your own personal examples. I appreciate everyone's candidness.:)
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I don't think the font is that hard to read its just a bit overwhelming....what I would do is take out the wash / wax letting on that side of the card....and insert your name and phone number (personal data) use the same font and color....this to me will balance the card
 
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