critique my new tag line = ]

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deadlock32

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I never really had a nifty tag line, its always been:



Smooth Reflections - Mobile Detailing and Paint Rejuvination



But I've been working on this for about 2 weeks, most of it was tweeking. So what do you think?



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IMO - too juvenile...I saw that and immediately thought of the notorious bumper sticker that says "I (heart) hooters", or "I (heart) strippers"
 
Thanks, I have decided to not use it. While most of my friends said they liked it, one in particular told me that if I am offering such services (high end =] ) that I should have a nicer, unique tag line. Similar to what you told me toyotaguy. Back to the drawing board.



This image is open to use by anyone for non commercial purposes... if you want to use it for commercial purposes please let me know first = ] (i'd probably ask for one of what ever your are putting it on like a bumper sticker or shirt)
 
toyotaguy said:
IMO - too juvenile...I saw that and immediately thought of the notorious bumper sticker that says "I (heart) hooters", or "I (heart) strippers"
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Yeah- didn't work for NY either. I bet they only sell a million or so of bumper stickers and T's with that on it. :)

Depending on the personality of the proprietor (and the business), it's not horrible. I've seen a lot worse...
 
kompressornsc said:
Yeah- didn't work for NY either. I bet they only sell a million or so of bumper stickers and T's with that on it. :)

Depending on the personality of the proprietor (and the business), it's not horrible. I've seen a lot worse...
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Yeah right! the I <3 NY was a HUGE success.



I Love New York - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia



its the reason why so many people copy the core idea with stuff like I <3 dogs or I <3 strippers.



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