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deadlock32

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Hey guys I've been working all weekend on my homepage and I was wondering you could tell me what you think. I would like to thank GTA IN DETAIL because his great website helped me create my own.



Just follow the link in my avatar.
 
Pretty slick, and the big graphic of the rear of the car is cool. But...



The text is too long and not enough pictures. I started reading, but then I got bored. I know you're trying to convey some information, but it's too much. You need to catch the potential client's attention and what you're selling is how good you make cars look. I think the graphic of the car is limiting the space you have to show your product. Sorry. I know you spent a lot of effort to get everything to work with that graphic.
 
hooked said:
Pretty slick, and the big graphic of the rear of the car is cool. But...



The text is too long and not enough pictures. I started reading, but then I got bored. I know you're trying to convey some information, but it's too much. You need to catch the potential client's attention and what you're selling is how good you make cars look. I think the graphic of the car is limiting the space you have to show your product. Sorry. I know you spent a lot of effort to get everything to work with that graphic.
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Actually I've got the space for the pics... im missing the pics. I need to get some high quality pictures of my work, which I am lacking currently. That whole left side is going to be for pics to auto scroll and if you click on it it will take you to that car's gallery. Thanks = ]
 
Amazing..I love how you used that car as the main frame for all of your pages and just simply altered the color. I also like how you dont have to load the pages one by one, how it loads as a whole in the begining. Great site....just wow :)



Are you using dreamweaver or another program? Also where did you find that picture to use as your layout. Thanks!!
 
Joshua312 said:
Amazing..I love how you used that car as the main frame for all of your pages and just simply altered the color. I also like how you dont have to load the pages one by one, how it loads as a whole in the begining. Great site....just wow :)



Are you using dreamweaver or another program? Also where did you find that picture to use as your layout. Thanks!!
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The entire side created with Macro... I mean Adobe Flash. I cant find the picture i used but from from this lambo: http://articles.motortoday.com/testdrive/Murcielago/Murcielago_rear.jpg



Though I did have to photo chop it to work better as a site.
 
Hey, great looking site!



Some technicalities I found when looking at it with Firefox (most recent update)



1. The 'Scrolling' feature does not work unless your cursor is hovering directly over the scroll bar.

2. The scrolling isnt' smooth.



Awsome site otherwise, great potential. Reading other sites, I feel that 'Simpler/less is more', and makes an easier read. Instead of making all the information available all at once, perhaps break up the more technical information to a seperate page, so there's no information overload!



Best regards!
 
zapata5150 said:
blah auto zone detailer shabby u should of left me alone
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I like it. Different than most websites. I agree with the one poster on less woding though. I think making the text rollovers "pop" more would be cool too. maybe have the shimmer or gleam upon initial rollover? That might be too much though.



Nice job!
 
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