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Concours.John

Concours.John

Auto Detail & Restoration
Just curios on input. Due to shows etc. these are already in the hands of 300 people. Any input will be taken into consideration. They are tri-folds on heavy stock full gloss.

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Thanks for any input good or bad.
 
I cannot see anything that I would not have on a brochure of my own. It looks fantastic. Simple, informative, and to the point.
 
I like it John but I couldn't make out the number to call. I wanted my car detailed after reading it
 
Looks great John. If I could make only one suggestion, the name Pontiac Enthusiast is misspelled. Otherwise, it's perfect!
 
If it were me, I'd go for a different typeface/font and format the text blocks a little differently, but as far as the content and copy it looks great!
 
Shiny Lil Detlr said:
If it were me, I'd go for a different typeface/font and format the text blocks a little differently, but as far as the content and copy it looks great!
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I'm working on things. This is the first public offering. I've been hidden from public services.

Thank you all for review. Keep it coming.
 
mrclean81 said:
The pic with Dennis Gage is a really nice touch. Very well thought out and put together. I like it a lot.
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That vehicle behind us was chosen as best of show, He was grand marshal. I with one other person restored it it took best of show out of 1000 cars. It ment alot. I have a the same picture with his writing sayingn"john i like your work" That means alot.
 
Very nice brochure. I would break up the paragraph in the left most panel so there is fewer words in the paragraph to make it easier to read.

What a plug for AF!

I guess your potential clients do not use mechanical car washes so no mention of them unless I missed something.
 
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