Yet another "what do you think of my website thread"?

SweatTheDetails

SweatTheDetails

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<span style="color:rgb(0,0,0);font-family:verdana, geneva, lucida, 'lucida grande', arial, helvetica, sans-serif;font-size:13px;">Spent the entire day building it. This is my first time attempting something like this. I always had a guy do it for me, but i think its time to get more control over it. Its still a work in progress so any tips and comments are welcome.

Sweat The Details - Home
 
I briefly looked and noticed you moved out of Michigan? Realistically, your prices are way too low for the Florida market. Hack immigrant newbie detailers are charging your rates. If you want to attract cheap people then by all means go right ahead. But Florida (especially Jax/Ponte-Vedra) has a ton of high end cars & clientele that you should target. I also don't like your Description of Services page. I'd fatten up your Detailing Menu and do something else with that page. 
 
Replace the top photo with the original photo (no special effects). I would much rather see you in a normal photo.


Why do you have the coast guard video on the page?


The page title says "Sweat The Details - Home". You need to add your city and state. 


Your blog needs to be more apparent - most people will not click on the more page. The point of a blog is highlight your experience and expertise. 


Could use better content. 


 


It's not great but it's not bad. Did you code everything yourself or did you use a CMS?
 
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