Hey guys I'm new to the forum please check out my web page at www.littlescleaningandmobileautodetailing.com and let me know how I can improve it thanks in advance for the feedback.
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JaredPointer
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On the top banner: If your name is 'Little' then you need to put Little's instead of Littles If it's 'Littles' then it needs to be Littles'. Also, put a space between Auto & Detailing.
Maybe the pics on the home page could show a little more color? The all blue scheme is nice, but I think color photos may look better to the eye.
On your services menu, you need to keep capitalization uniform. Either start with lower case and saty that way, or capitalize all the services. Example: Window Cleaning or window cleaning instead of window Cleaning.
Other than that it really seems like you have a nice little site started. You really have a lot of services. One thing I didn't see any mention of was paint correction - swirl removal, etc. Are you going to offer that?
Good luck on your site. You have a winner going on there so far. Best of luck.
Maybe the pics on the home page could show a little more color? The all blue scheme is nice, but I think color photos may look better to the eye.
On your services menu, you need to keep capitalization uniform. Either start with lower case and saty that way, or capitalize all the services. Example: Window Cleaning or window cleaning instead of window Cleaning.
Other than that it really seems like you have a nice little site started. You really have a lot of services. One thing I didn't see any mention of was paint correction - swirl removal, etc. Are you going to offer that?
Good luck on your site. You have a winner going on there so far. Best of luck.
ron`s
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Nice Music :band :dancin
Focusedonsound
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You have some formating issues!
1. In your button bar you should list your home page as Home or Main page not Index they are typicly 2 very differnt things
2. At the top of your home page the Text in the Explorer area it says Home on your home page services on your service page ... you should have it say your websites name - Home and so on simalar to what Detail city has done!
3. Your services page loads slower than molasas I like the touch with the music but most users who don't have super fast connections won't ... It took a long time to load on my Connection which is a duplexed Cable connection.
4. Your about us page ... your buttons are off my screen to ther right!
My suggestions would be as follows ... Get rid of that button bar you are using completely and move and have one at the top of the page (its hard to explain where I would put it but here it goes) Right below the blueCarEngine_car.gif picture the way the graphic is I would put your buttons in the left area from the left of the screen to the part where it makes the 45* drop ... home that makes sense I think it would look good there!
Another thing ... On the home page in the top inside the graphic you have the name of your business ... Im not sure what font your useing however you should make sure to be consistant through out the site! And should probably continue it in your Buttons as well
On your contact us page ... you should probably include more information than that... When someone wants to get an answer now weather or not you can do a detail tommorow its a lot easier ... It doesn't mean you have to answer it... but if they can leave a message then better than nothing at all! (just a suggestion)
I like the over all concept of the page ... and there is nothing wrong with the blues you have used it tends to flow very well as far as page design goes ... my recomendation would be to make the changes above ... add some pictures of cars that you have done to add some colors to 1 if not all pages (customers rides page) kinda thing .....
You may think of adding a testimonials page. I notice a lot more places adding these pages... People beleive what other people are saying a lot more than they beleive what your saying (no offense you might be the best detailer in the whole world) but if 100% of your customers go to your site and say You did an awesome job on my car ill be back in 6 months or whatever ...Id be more likely to drop my car off!
I think thats it!
Good luck
1. In your button bar you should list your home page as Home or Main page not Index they are typicly 2 very differnt things
2. At the top of your home page the Text in the Explorer area it says Home on your home page services on your service page ... you should have it say your websites name - Home and so on simalar to what Detail city has done!
3. Your services page loads slower than molasas I like the touch with the music but most users who don't have super fast connections won't ... It took a long time to load on my Connection which is a duplexed Cable connection.
4. Your about us page ... your buttons are off my screen to ther right!
My suggestions would be as follows ... Get rid of that button bar you are using completely and move and have one at the top of the page (its hard to explain where I would put it but here it goes) Right below the blueCarEngine_car.gif picture the way the graphic is I would put your buttons in the left area from the left of the screen to the part where it makes the 45* drop ... home that makes sense I think it would look good there!
Another thing ... On the home page in the top inside the graphic you have the name of your business ... Im not sure what font your useing however you should make sure to be consistant through out the site! And should probably continue it in your Buttons as well
On your contact us page ... you should probably include more information than that... When someone wants to get an answer now weather or not you can do a detail tommorow its a lot easier ... It doesn't mean you have to answer it... but if they can leave a message then better than nothing at all! (just a suggestion)
I like the over all concept of the page ... and there is nothing wrong with the blues you have used it tends to flow very well as far as page design goes ... my recomendation would be to make the changes above ... add some pictures of cars that you have done to add some colors to 1 if not all pages (customers rides page) kinda thing .....
You may think of adding a testimonials page. I notice a lot more places adding these pages... People beleive what other people are saying a lot more than they beleive what your saying (no offense you might be the best detailer in the whole world) but if 100% of your customers go to your site and say You did an awesome job on my car ill be back in 6 months or whatever ...Id be more likely to drop my car off!
I think thats it!
Good luck
I offer this suggestion. Get some good before and afters. I think pictures really show the quality of work and get people excited about getting their car detailed.
I have looked at alot of detailer sites and I'm always surprised that they either don't have B&A pics or they don't show the quality of improvement. This usually seems to be the result of bad photography more than bad detailing. Back to the subject. You do have some minor things to fix. Your "Aboutus" and "Contactus" buttons need spaces. Other than that if the site suits your style and clientel your pretty well set.
I have looked at alot of detailer sites and I'm always surprised that they either don't have B&A pics or they don't show the quality of improvement. This usually seems to be the result of bad photography more than bad detailing. Back to the subject. You do have some minor things to fix. Your "Aboutus" and "Contactus" buttons need spaces. Other than that if the site suits your style and clientel your pretty well set.
Woob
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I haven't read about what most of the peeps have said here, but that site address is extremely long. Any way to shorten it?
i didnt read through all your comments fully but here i what i saw.
just read through everything very carfully and look at your wordings and stuff like that i saw a few things but didnt take note.
the pages differ in size left to right some are good some are twice the size of my screen.
the buttons move to diff locations try to put it near the top and always in the same location.
on your services page some of the writing is on blue and some on white. maybe shift it down off the white heading and have it all on the blue backround.
use homepage not INDEX
use some more pictures and examples of your work
MORE DETAIL.....you bought this address dont waste it....probally have tons of space so use it. put some pics and more about your company and things like that...make another page if you have to...maybe a gallery of work page or 2.
maybe its just the sizing issue again but the words on the home page overlaps with the pictures and u cant read the last word or 2 in each line.
maybe some more colors not just blue....
just a few things to look at.
just read through everything very carfully and look at your wordings and stuff like that i saw a few things but didnt take note.
the pages differ in size left to right some are good some are twice the size of my screen.
the buttons move to diff locations try to put it near the top and always in the same location.
on your services page some of the writing is on blue and some on white. maybe shift it down off the white heading and have it all on the blue backround.
use homepage not INDEX
use some more pictures and examples of your work
MORE DETAIL.....you bought this address dont waste it....probally have tons of space so use it. put some pics and more about your company and things like that...make another page if you have to...maybe a gallery of work page or 2.
maybe its just the sizing issue again but the words on the home page overlaps with the pictures and u cant read the last word or 2 in each line.
maybe some more colors not just blue....
just a few things to look at.
JaredPointer
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Hey! Just checked out your site again and you have made some improvements. That's good. Keep on working on it!!