Raining here for two weeks: Revamped the entire website

[RenuAuto]

Comments and especially criticism appreciated :wavey



Renu

 

[JohnKleven]

Wow, you're lucky. It's only rained for two weeks. It seems that Seattle has had rain for 2 months. Website looks great too...

 

[Scottwax]

Nice job on the website. Sucks about the rain, went through it last winter here (along with the 2nd most snowfall every for winter) so I feel your pain.

 

[Barry Theal]

Loks really good!

 

[imported_WCD]

Beyond the aesthetics of the site, you did not title it correctly, or well for SEO. Your title is Renu. Look at the top of the page when you are on your homepage. Look at mine: Santa Barbara Auto and Car Detailing: The Auto Detailing Teacher The title is KEY in SEO.



(Speaking like an 80's high school student)... It's like a hot chick hanging getting lost on the way to the party....your site is hot, but no one will find it.



Rob

 

[imported_WCD]

Also, I would NEVER state that, "I'm not very good at business..." I think you have a very charismatic personality, but you are being "too cute" in the delivery over the Net. "Play" this way with customers once they know you, but for first impressions, I think you should rewrite the "WHO" page.



I am going to rewrite it and send it to you in an email. Rob

 

[imported_dfazekas]

check all your links again



the "learn more" link at the bottom of the home page under the premium detailing pic seems to be broken.



looks-wise, though, i like it a lot.



best of luck to you in the future.