New slogan, what do you think?

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Apollo_Auto

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OK so as some of you may know already, I've been working with a detailing product manufacturer for some time now and we're on the last phase of wrapping things up now, which is the branding. I'm finished with the logo, the web site's under construction, etc. Anyway, what do you think of this slogan? >>



"Detailing products engineered by chemists and perfected by professionals..."



TIA!! And don't worry, I'll let the cat out of the bag soon! ;)



- Jesse
 
tssdetailing said:
that's a mouthful, cut it back to like 5-8 words. Maybe just "engineered by chemists, perfected by pros"
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Yeah, I thought so too. It's already been reduced to "Engineered by science, perfected by professionals"



Thanks guys!
 
You might suggest a slogan for Ferrari while you're working on it:



"Hacked in Maranello, perfected in Hungary."



:har:
 
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