My new website

tdekany- Hey, that's a good website :xyxthumbs



The retired teacher in me wants to fix a few typos ;) but other than that it's great.
 
Accumulator said:
tdekany- Hey, that's a good website :xyxthumbs



The retired teacher in me wants to fix a few typos ;) but other than that it's great.



Thanks!



BTW, I know I need to go back and fix the typos, but fell free to point them out. :D
 
tdekany said:
BTW, I know I need to go back and fix the typos, but fell free to point them out. :D



On the Homepage, where it says "When you call DPR, for your detailing needs...", I'd take out the comma between "DPR" and "for". I.e., "When you call DPR for your detailing needs, ....".



I'd add a period after all the abreviations of "Mister". I.e., "Mr. Dekany" instead of "Mr Dekany".



Hey, you think *I* am a nitpicker, you ought meet my wife the copyeditor :eek: But seriously, I'm glad I didn't come across like a jerk; I really do think that little things like that can make a diff when it comes to first impressions, at least with some people.
 
The site is looking good Thomas....



By the way, if you use Firefox, there is a very quick way to check the spelling of your site. Might work in some other browsers as well, but not IE.



Just go to any page on your website, then copy and paste this in the address bar and remove the space in 'java script':



Code:
java script:document.[COLOR=#006600]body[/COLOR].[COLOR=#006600]contentEditable[/COLOR]=[COLOR=#3366CC]'true'[/COLOR]; document.[COLOR=#006600]designMode[/COLOR]=[COLOR=#3366CC]'on'[/COLOR]; [COLOR=#000066][B]void[/B][/COLOR] [COLOR=#CC0000]0[/COLOR]
 
Thank you Accumulator.



Accumulator said:
On the Homepage, where it says "When you call DPR, for your detailing needs...", I'd take out the comma between "DPR" and "for". I.e., "When you call DPR for your detailing needs, ....".



I'd add a period after all the abreviations of "Mister". I.e., "Mr. Dekany" instead of "Mr Dekany".



Hey, you think *I* am a nitpicker, you ought meet my wife the copyeditor :eek: But seriously, I'm glad I didn't come across like a jerk; I really do think that little things like that can make a diff when it comes to first impressions, at least with some people.
 
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