Thomas Dekany
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What do you think of it? Suggestions? 99% done, but I know I will rewrite some of it.
Thanks!
www.tdekany.com
Thanks!
www.tdekany.com
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Accumulator said:tdekany- Hey, that's a good website :xyxthumbs
The retired teacher in me wants to fix a few typosbut other than that it's great.
tdekany said:BTW, I know I need to go back and fix the typos, but fell free to point them out.![]()
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Accumulator said:On the Homepage, where it says "When you call DPR, for your detailing needs...", I'd take out the comma between "DPR" and "for". I.e., "When you call DPR for your detailing needs, ....".
I'd add a period after all the abreviations of "Mister". I.e., "Mr. Dekany" instead of "Mr Dekany".
Hey, you think *I* am a nitpicker, you ought meet my wife the copyeditorBut seriously, I'm glad I didn't come across like a jerk; I really do think that little things like that can make a diff when it comes to first impressions, at least with some people.
tssdetailing said:The massive "T Dekany" script across the top graphic is so large that it's almost hard to read.