My first flyer design...

[imported_Ivan Rajic]

Front is obviously not complete yet, but that's the idea... put Name, #, website and e-mail, then a few pictures showing all around the car, clean hopefully :lol

Back is pretty much finished



What do you guys think...



Front





Back

 

[jeteast99]

if its a flyer and going to be mass produced i think the background color should be changed.

 

[imported_Ivan Rajic]

if its a flyer and going to be mass produced i think the background color should be changed.

The background meaning full black?? why?

 

[imported_slicknickis3]

The background meaning full black?? why?

Because that's ALOT of black ink.

 

[imported_Ivan Rajic]

Because that's ALOT of black ink.

I'm not printing it... that's what I pay for..

 

[Jake.K]

...it actually wouldnt be any black ink, just printed on black paper, or so i would assume?

And with all those pics and color, how much is this costing you?

 

[imported_Ivan Rajic]

...it actually wouldnt be any black ink, just printed on black paper, or so i would assume?

And with all those pics and color, how much is this costing you?

No clue yet... I'm going through gotprint.com and here is their pricing..

Got Print: Full Color Printing



They lower prices on black/white so a lot of black doesn't really matter... I don't know if they'll increase prices because of photos, but I doubt it.

 

[imported_Ivan Rajic]

Anyone have any comments apart from the ink?



How does the back look, since I think I'm done with it??

 

[SilverSubie2.5]

On the back, I would toss your name above the contact information so they know who they would be speaking with when they call. Just me though. The rest of it looks pretty good.

 

[imported_Ivan Rajic]

On the back, I would toss your name above the contact information so they know who they would be speaking with when they call. Just me though. The rest of it looks pretty good.

I thought about that as well... I figured "ivan" in the e-mail would do the trick, but putting my name bigger might be better

 

[Envious Eric]

dont like the front...like the back...



plus I get my stuff from gotprint.net and am totally satisfied with their product

 

[imported_Ivan Rajic]

dont like the front...like the back...



plus I get my stuff from gotprint.net and am totally satisfied with their product

Can you explain why you don't like the front a bit... it's not complete and the pictures on there are just random to show roughly how they'll be "organized"...

 

[gtrentii]

Don't like the front too much ...too busy. Go for more quality out of the pictures and less quantity. On the second page, nice...with the exception i would retake car picture out of the driveway and use empy parking lot or field with green grass. brings out the shine in the car more and will make people focus on the cars detail and not the surroundings. I also agree with the color change, I'd get rid of the black background.

 

[JBSpeed]

Loose the beveling and and shadowing on the lettering...looks cheesy. Other than that, thumbs up from me

 

[danforz]

The front is good, but it could be more organized. I'd recommend using in sun photos that will have a greater "WOW" effect, since after all your trying to get your customers attention. Mind you also, customers may never see the front, so the back also needs a wow effect, which I just noticed it actually has with that porchse. Get some in sun photos, make them larger (maybe even just use one LARGE REALLY WOW photo on front). Otherwise I think your on the right track

 

[imported_416 Auto]

Hey whats up? For doing it yourself it looks pretty good. The colours are very common for the industry and customers who have seen other marketing identify with them. Your spacing is a bit out of wack but if you adjust it a bit it wil really really make a differance in the visual effect of the flyer. What I mean is add some space above the words '' basic wash package'' and below the price ''$180'' at the bottom. Just reduce the font size a bit and add some space above and below. Text shoud never go right to the top or bottom. This will have a great effect and make it look like it was designed for you a little more. Also on the back the white line that runs from top to bottom could use a slight trim. Once you add the spacing line that white line up with it. That line will look alot slicker if it does not touch the top and bottom and it gives a classier feeling. It is a great place to start though, you did a great job on it. I really like the different pics on the front. I like the colours and the font. You have an eye for it. If you look at it with you perrefrial (no idea on spelling...LOL ) vision it looks pretty balanced and smooth. If you are still into this post let me know. I have a few more sugg's about the wording aswell



Thanks,

416

 

[imported_Ivan Rajic]

416 and others... thanks for all the suggestions... I got a bit held back with some other work, detailing work, selling my car, buying a bike, plus the everyday crap life throws at you...

I've been a bit slow with the flyer and website, but will be starting on finishing it soon haha



416 feel free to PM me any and all suggestions you have about anything... I always like reading stuff like that, especially when it can potentially help me

 

[imported_mirrorfinishman]

Ivan,



You have done a good job. Your prospective clients should be very impressed with your presentation. Image is everything!

 

[imported_Ivan Rajic]

Well I finally finished and printed these... for anyone who cares to see haha



I really like the back, and won't touch it in any future prints, but I think the front is not "perfect" yet, so I'll be messing around with that... any suggestions are welcome, even for the back that I won't touch



Front:

Back:

 

[southpactire]

Nice job on your flyer!