how does this sound guys?

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03k20a2

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well i have decided to start a part-time detailing business like many of you. i went to a printing shop today to print up some business cards and he told me to think of a slogan and then ill be set. so this is what i came up with



REFLECTIONS REVIVED

"At your place, on my time"

"We look at all details"

"Don't paint, rejuvenate"



please comment on these and if you could, throw some more slogans out there.

by the way, i will be doing mobile detailing mostly
 
Out of the three, I like "Don't paint, rejuvenate" the best. A swing on your "We look at all details" could be "It's all in the details". Just a thought for you.



Something that helps me with stuff like this is brainstorming. Sit down in a quiet room, and get a paper and pen. Clear your mind of everything but detailing a car, and write down any and every word or thought that pops in your head that describes detailing. Don't pay too much attention to where you are writing or anything, just randomly write the words/thoughts all over the place. After you fill the paper, take a look at what you put down and circle key words that you like. You'll be surprised at what might pop out at you.



Good luck!
 
Don't be too much of a hurry for a slogan. One will come to you. One day you will hear it and know it.



I overheard a client talking with one of her friends. The friend asked me earlier what I charged and she thought it was to much. This "friend" told my client that she knew a detailer that charged less and did pretty good work. My client told her, "Pretty good isn't good enough!!!"





Wala - SUPERIOR SHINE, PRETTY GOOD ISN'T GOOD ENOUGH!!!!
 
"At your place, on my time" - Kinda sounds like a prostitution slogan lol

"We look at all details" - We? Isn't it just you?

"Don't paint, rejuvenate" - Kinda targets a single crowd.

Sorry to get down on all of them, although I do like the suggested "Its all in the details" although you also wanna look at it from the point of view of the customer. I cant really think of any right now (I'm not in a silent room and its hard to think of that kinda stuff with extra noise, weird how that works), but I'll let you know if I think of a good one later.
 
Pontman43 said:
"We look at all details" - We? Isn't it just you?
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If you're an incorporated company I'd always use "we" even if there's just one of you. They (the client/general public) won't necessarily know that you're a one man outfit, it makes you're business look bigger (and there are heaps of people who will always go for the bigger sounding business on principle), and it also prepares you for when you may take on some staff - i.e. you won't have to chage your slogan.



Just my opinion.



Ben
 
Give it time, it will come to you. Make sure to be prepared to deal with customers thats all I can say. People that ask for our services expect a lot most of the time. Offer A++ customer service and no one will worry about what your slogan is
 
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