False Statements?

Looks good to me. I like the choice of pics at the bottom too. Good before and after. I don't see anything that could be considered false at all. I think your golden with that page.
 
What are most of your customers going to get? Paint correction or a shampoo/steam/hot water extraction/leather clean/ect?



You need face-lift pictures of the most popular services imho.
 
I gave your web page a quick looksie and corrected a few typos for you: :grinno:



"When you run your car through the local $8 wash tunnel, you are (create a new phrase :idea)."



"Our services provide you with a way to retain your vehicle's value and will alleviate the burden of having to set aside time to clean your car and allows you to focus on work, family, and your personal life. ts|s:think: detailing will bring our service to your car, so all you have to do is hand us the keys!"



"Detailing will give your car a brand new look on the inside and outside, increase its value and add satisfaction to your commute. Exterior detailing will remove hazes and swirl marks from your paint, making its reflection brilliant and flawless."



(Here is the proper way to use it's/its: It's a beautiful Labrador. Its fur is tan. It's a 2009 Camaro. It's powered by a 6.2L V8. Its color is Red.)



"Engine Detailing removes years of road dust, grime and grease, and protects the engine from future deterioration from sediment."



"The duration of the job is based on the condition of the car."



"Now look at the sun's glare on your car: Do you notice the reticulation or "spider webs" from improper washing over years (or even months)?"
 
MichaelSpoots said:
I gave your web page a quick looksie and corrected a few typos for you: :grinno:



"When you run your car through the local $8 wash tunnel, you are (create a new phrase :idea)."



"Our services provide you with a way to retain your vehicle's value and will alleviate the burden of having to set aside time to clean your car and allows you to focus on work, family, and your personal life. ts|s:think: detailing will bring our service to your car, so all you have to do is hand us the keys!"



"Detailing will give your car a brand new look on the inside and outside, increase its value and add satisfaction to your commute. Exterior detailing will remove hazes and swirl marks from your paint, making its reflection brilliant and flawless."



(Here is the proper way to use it's/its: It's a beautiful Labrador. Its fur is tan. It's a 2009 Camaro. It's powered by a 6.2L V8. Its color is Red.)



"Engine Detailing removes years of road dust, grime and grease, and protects the engine from future deterioration from sediment."



"The duration of the job is based on the condition of the car."



"Now look at the sun's glare on your car: Do you notice the reticulation or "spider webs" from improper washing over years (or even months)?"
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you are the man!!! Thank you!
 
Jean-Claude said:
What are most of your customers going to get? Paint correction or a shampoo/steam/hot water extraction/leather clean/ect?



You need face-lift pictures of the most popular services imho.
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Thank you! As we serve more clients, we'll get more photos for sure!
 
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