Check out my new card design (along with the old one)

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deadlock32

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so here is my new card front and back, and my old one to show the difference.



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I would like to thank Jamie Cuthill and Rich (WX51 TXR) for the fine water beading pic. Of course it was completely changed and tweeked, but w/ out that base background pic I would have had to go to another direction, and believe me google pics had very little good water beading pics = P... unfortunatly I cannot find the base pic, but here is a similar thread = ]

http://autopia.org/forum/click-brag/80250-tall-pert-beading-just-way-i-like.html
 
I like it, especially the clever slogan you've got on the back.



Your logo seems to be a bit muted against the beading pic though. And the beading pics sorta doesn't match the name of your business. Kinda like if I named my business Black Magic Detailing and I had a picture of a shiny white car. I'm just being nitpicky :D It looks professional IMO.
 
toyotaguy said:
and whats the picture on the back relevant to? or what is it?



I think you should try and get a picture of a car SPARKLING
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oh its a picture of me. the digital pic makes everything a bit darker.
 
Looks good I like the design both front and back . I can tell the picture on the back is someone ( now we know its you) looking down the side of the car . I like that look better then the reflection of someone in the paint .:xyxthumbs :xyxthumbs
 
Honestly, one of the best detailing business cards I've seen. The photo on the front shows what a car 'should' look like, the information is clear and concise, the secondary name explains the primary name, the photo on the back shows the personal attention and thoroughness, while the tag line with the double entendre is interesting and makes you think a bit (and makes people feel smart when the 'get it'-the same effect as a joke).



But what do I know, I've only been in the marketing business for 15 years. :)
 
for some reason I couldnt tell what it was this morning 5 minutes after I rolled out of bed....now its more clear...I still think the front pic should be changed, but thats just my opinion
 
I prefer "Paint Restoration" not Rejuvenation. On the back of the card you must think marketing. You need to put something on there that will make them pick up the phone and call you. For example, "You will be absolutely thrilled and delighted, I Guarantee it."
 
I actuall had the same idea for a business card! The beading part I mean. I washed my truck the other day and it was beading like crazy! (Thank you DG!!) Took a pic of it and it was SO kewl!! Nice to see a card wit that on there! It helped me make the decision! Still batting around ideas for a slogan though.......:think:
 
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