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    Hey BOSS take a look!!!!!

    One ofmy customers has been pooring money into this car like crazy. Let me answer the questions that I know are going to come up.

    Did I drive it? :shift YES!!!!
    Was it fast? :hurl you have no idea
    OH! and about the engine, I did not detail it she is still being tuned so he didnt want me to do anything to it yet. All I can say is :drool

    ONE SICK COBRA

    Now this was an interesting one. One of the fastest volvos I have ever driven. AWD V6 Turbo 6 SP this thing looks nice and moves like crazy. Sorry for the water droplets but its florida and it rains here every 15 minutes

    Volvo R type
    There is allways room for improvement

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    Re: Hey BOSS take a look!!!!!

    BOING!!!!!! @ the Cobra


    BTW I don`t think Boss is here anymore

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    Re: Hey BOSS take a look!!!!!

    OH!! no BOSS? Well let me change the title to "HEY COBRA LOVERS"!!!!!!!


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    Re: Hey BOSS take a look!!!!!

    JP, that IS a sick Cobra, and a fantastic website by the way. I have two nits though, and don`t take these the wrong way and by no means am I implying that I know more or have more skills than yourself. This is just some constructive criticism. The first nit is that I wouldn`t put the photo of the Cobras engine bay on the site. It`s obviously not very clean, and we here know why because you explained it to us, but someone perusing your site doesn`t know that you haven`t touched it or why and may think you did a really poor job on it. The second concern is that there are many grammatical errors on your site. Perhaps you might have someone who is very articulate (an English major, resume writer etc.) proofread it and make revisions where necessary. Again, I`m not flaming you or anything, just trying to help. :jump

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    Re: Hey BOSS take a look!!!!!

    Point taken, the pic was only a DC show and tell and will be eliminated tomorow. Also about the gramatical errors I have somebody working on it allready. He just wanted me to put my idea and what I wanted it to say and the he would go throught it ad fix my horrors. But don`t worry about I apreciate any pointers that you can give me.

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    Re: Hey BOSS take a look!!!!!

    jp, on here, grammatical help is just about all I can provide. :lol I`m learning alot from pros like yourself though. Once again, that`s a great looking website. I need to get something like that for my teaching and photography endeavors. Cheers.

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    Re: Hey BOSS take a look!!!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by CARTfan
    jp, on here, grammatical help is just about all I can provide. :lol I`m learning alot from pros like yourself though. Once again, that`s a great looking website. I need to get something like that for my teaching and photography endeavors. Cheers.

    Thanx.
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