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    Re: First Biz card attempt

    This was posted on Autogeek but shows you can get a lot of info on the card. I am not saying this is the best designed card but shows what you can add.


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    Re: First Biz card attempt

    How about this?

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    Re: First Biz card attempt

    I like this iteration much better.
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    Re: First Biz card attempt

    I like this much better too. Are you going to put anything on the rear such as the services offered?

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    The second draft looks good. I always recommend getting the UV coating. The colors end up better and the card holds up longer.
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    Re: First Biz card attempt

    I think its got too much color going on. Once it is sized down you lose detail and it becomes too busy. Try a black background with tha car a bit smaller, maybe even tranparent or ghosted in the background, then bright letters that have a cleaner font and dont cover the car in anyway. Just my opinion. Good luck.



    second one looks great

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    Re: First Biz card attempt

    Quote Originally Posted by GearHead_1 View Post
    I like this iteration much better.
    Admit it...you only like this one better because it`s got a Mustang on it. hehe.

    Coming from a professional graphic designer, this latest one is certainly better than your first attempt which was way too busy and cluttered. Be sure to keep your type far enough away from the edges or it`ll get cut off. 1/8" or more is a safe bet.

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    Yeah that creepy letter thing you had going has got to go. I agree with the guy that said get UV coating, cause it reminds me of a freshly waxed car
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    Re: First Biz card attempt



    Latest version

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    Re: First Biz card attempt

    I love the Mach 1!!!!! You should explain some of your services on the rear side of the card as well.


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    Re: First Biz card attempt

    Thats more like it Nice and simple

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    Re: First Biz card attempt

    Best yet! Yeah it`s probably the Mustang, YNOT.
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