Give me Your Opinion

[Jngrbrdman]

Don`t assume that just because someone is effecient that they are cutting corners.

[The Pit]

A couple more comments on your b-card.

1. You`re using too many different fonts. Pick one (two at most) and stick with it. You can use bold, italics, and different type sizes for highlight. Too many different fonts make it hard to read.

2. The back side is too crowded... more white space needed, especially the last six lines of text.

Hope thats helpful.

[C. Charles Hahn]

Don`t assume that just because someone is effecient that they are cutting corners.

True.... there are a bunch of factors involved in that. I know I`d be more efficient if my equipment were better organized; that`s my first project to tackle next spring when I migrate everything from the basement back to the garage. At the same time, though, I know you can`t expect to be "efficient" if you`re taking a pair of tweezers to the carpet to pull nap pills and grit particles out

[bigron62]

nice card . show us the final product .. also im seeing some thread hijacking here ... possible post whoring -

[C. Charles Hahn]

also im seeing some thread hijacking here ... possible post whoring -

I don`t know if you`re talking about me, but if you are I don`t appreciate it. :chair: There`s no need to be throwing accusations around/policing.

Back on topic though, in case I didn`t mention before: I like the card, Shaun.

[Patrick]

Looks good Shaun....I seriously doubt the consumer analyzes cards anyway. Its more of a first impression. It looks good!

[hemin8r]

I like the colors, looks classy & clean. I agree with all the comments made about revising your wording. Great job.

[bigron62]

shiny if you have a beef with me we can handle it by pm or e mail .. dont be flaming people here ... im not the dc police but we try not to hijack threads here ... welcome to dc ... also you have a pm ..

[The Fuzz]

I`m the DC police and I don`t really see any thread jacking here... until now. Let`s all try not to take offense where none is intended. If you are looking for offense then I`m sure you can find it. Let`s all try to be a little less sensitive and start acting like the gruff thick skinned detailers we are, comprende?

[jaybs02]

Shaun, I know I`m a little late to the party but, I`m gonna echo some of the others comments about some of the phrases and the diffent fonts.

All in all I like the card.
Have you come up with the final revision yet?

"J"

[C. Charles Hahn]

I`m the DC police and I don`t really see any thread jacking here... until now. Let`s all try not to take offense where none is intended. If you are looking for offense then I`m sure you can find it. Let`s all try to be a little less sensitive and start acting like the gruff thick skinned detailers we are, comprende?

Oh and for the original poster, I just found a copy of my business card that I had stashed on my web server... it isn`t as color-heavy or fancy, but it gets the job done:

[Brace1]

Run spellcheck before you have it printed, I noticed real quick "maintenence" instead of "maintenance".

I agree with the previous post about too many fonts, along with too many CAPS.

[joe.p]

I`m the DC police and I don`t really see any thread jacking here... until now. Let`s all try not to take offense where none is intended. If you are looking for offense then I`m sure you can find it. Let`s all try to be a little less sensitive and start acting like the gruff thick skinned detailers we are, comprende?

Hi buddy hope you enjoyed the New Year and had a Happy B-Day. I noticed your not only smooooth with the ladies but fluent in other languages. One of your other post you used the word capicse and today its comprende, Thats why your the MAN :yes: .

[The Fuzz]

C`est pourquoi je suis roi. :naughty

[C. Charles Hahn]

C`est pourquoi je suis roi. :naughty

我無法讀這 :boxing: