Advice on my CL ad?

**JBs** · 12-13-2007, 12:43 AM

i posted a couple funny ads a few threads down, and now that i think i am going to put an ad up on craigslist, i want it to look a little more professional.

please tell me what you think of this ad (5 mins of copy/pasting from the site)

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**Thomas Dekany** · 12-13-2007, 12:59 AM

I love it!

Like the pictures as well.

**tod071** · 12-13-2007, 01:23 AM

Looks great. Wish I could design something like for my CL ad. Very nice!

**AppliedColors** · 12-13-2007, 01:11 PM

Looks great, but some before pics would help.

By the way, CL might start blocking a .jpg that big.

**gtpaul** · 12-13-2007, 04:27 PM

font is too small, i had to squint to read it.

looks good otherwise

**ron231** · 12-16-2007, 09:09 PM

Lookin good except a few things

As stated above, the font needs to be a bit bigger.

Your leather conditioning price is a bit high, offer regular leather conditioner for 20, and ultra premium for 40.

Your Super Wash needs to be reworked, do you really want to do all that for only $80?

Also, do you own an extractor? If you do, make sure you mention that in your form because a lot of cheap detailers do not have one and simply leave the soapy solution in the carpet after blotting it dry.

**Chris@Optimum** · 12-16-2007, 10:55 PM

I really like the layout. Wording is all good. The font...ditto, maybe a little lighter blue background would make it an easier read. With that much info, maybe put a brief, abbreviated description for ppl who lose interest ez with all the details smaller underneath. JMHO. I am putting mine together now too so I will want you guys to look at mine B4 long.

Merry Christmas