revised logo! feedback needed!

Yeah, so I`ve redone the logo since last time. (for anyone new, i`m starting a side business detailing cars, simply because i`m getting so many requests after they see my cars that I don`t have a choice.. And besides, who can turn down free money...)





Thanks for the honesty, it really helped.



However, I`ve decided to stick with the same theme, except this time I`ve cleaned it up, got a real name, and made everything a little prettier, I think..



So, have a look, and gimme some feedback...



http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v4...ldetailing.jpg

The Christian right will be offended! :D

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Originally posted by Gonzo0903

The Christian right will be offended! :D

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You think so? I mean it`s a silly lookin devil...



Do they hate the Dirt Devil too? The NJ Devils? Devil Dogs?



:o

Looks good . The name is alot better then your last one . I see you changed it to your sloga,n it looks good in that spot . Before you commit to that ask some friends if they ever heard it . That way you`ll get some type of a gauge as to whether or not people will understand the meaning . Print the logo out and show it to some of your Christian friends . Good luck

IMO I would switch the locations of the `Red Devil` text and the devil himself. The first thing I saw was a devil holding a cross. I really like the name/slogan combination and the font choice. Maybe something more `cartoony` along these lines http://www.bradfitzpatrick.com/chara...l/LilDevil.gif or http://www.flatstyle.de/images/little_devil.gif something like that.



Just my thoughts

The "Red Devil" text looks a little detached, maybe remove the slant and put both words on the one line?



I like the strapline :)

Interesting they way Otravez saw it. The devil is holding a cross. Just what are your trying to convey?............hhhhhmmmmmm SATAN:angry !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Church Lady voice)



I like it a lot. Nice play on words.



I would change the "T" so it isn`t a cross. Maybe make it a pitch fork or something? :nixweiss



Or, change the location of the devil.



I think most people would not be offended though

"God is in the details" is a very well known slogan; substituting â€ËœGod with devilâ€â„¢ might be a problem with some people. I didnâ€â„¢t get a connection with the t + â€Ëœtail and a cross though.

I liked it, but think the T should look less like a cross. Nothing wrong with the devil aspect, but the cross is a no-no. I would put the T the same size as the rest of the text and get the devil to hand polish the top of "Detailing". Good work, though!