Another "Critique my site" thread

[Mack]

Hello fellow Autopians, hope this thread finds everyone doing well. I am in the process of updating my website. I would like some constructive criticism. What looks good, what needs to go. I know I do need a gallery(a real gallery page). Does anyone have any specific keywords they have had success with?

Thanks again,

Marcus

Dallas Ft Worth Metro Auto, Car Detailing by Ultimate Reflections

[mrclean81]

Im not expert in websites, but I think it looks good. Some might question your pricing, but your pretty close to mine. Some guys can charge more, some cant. It all comes down to your location. I also like the idea of add ons. I just read an article in Detailers Digest about add ons entitled "4 ways to make $40 or more on every detail". Got me to thinking about doing that as well. I also charge the same as you for 3rd row seating. Id say it looks good overall.

[GearHead_1]

Carlots (car lots) is two words.

[RTexasF]

"About Us" page. Incorrect spelling.....should be sacrificing not sacraficing

[Merlin]

IMHO
The scrolling should be much slower. That`ll "class it up" a bit.
Reduce the copy (text/words) on your homepage (Folks don`t like to read) Keep it short.
Use all the same size/type font on all the pages. Keep it uniform and simple.
Don`t "center" the text on the Services.htm page use left justify. Easier for folks to read.

You asked so there are my thoughts to get ya` started...

[XxBoostinxX]

I just read an article in Detailers Digest about add ons entitled "4 ways to make $40 or more on every detail".

You wouldn`t happen to have a link to this would you?


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[mrclean81]

This is about as good as I can do from my phone.
Detailers Digest, an award winning publication only for Detail Professionals

[Mr. Gloss]

IMHO
The scrolling should be much slower. That`ll "class it up" a bit.
Reduce the copy (text/words) on your homepage (Folks don`t like to read) Keep it short.
Use all the same size/type font on all the pages. Keep it uniform and simple.
Don`t "center" the text on the Services.htm page use left justify. Easier for folks to read.

You asked so there are my thoughts to get ya` started...

Good tips!

IMO websites should be simple and easy to navigate. Here`s a local guy with a classy site, very easy to navigate. A very simple front page with tabs to get you where you want to go.

HOME - Dynamic Detail

[Todd@RUPES]

Didn`t have much time to look through it completely but it looked good on the surface.