Concours.John flyer

**Concours.John** · 10-26-2011, 07:54 PM

Just curios on input. Due to shows etc. these are already in the hands of 300 people. Any input will be taken into consideration. They are tri-folds on heavy stock full gloss.

Front

Back

Thanks for any input good or bad.

**Garry Dean** · 10-26-2011, 08:06 PM

I cannot see anything that I would not have on a brochure of my own. It looks fantastic. Simple, informative, and to the point.

**Rocket** · 10-26-2011, 08:23 PM

I like it John but I couldn`t make out the number to call. I wanted my car detailed after reading it

**mikenap** · 10-26-2011, 08:37 PM

Looks great John. If I could make only one suggestion, the name Pontiac Enthusiast is misspelled. Otherwise, it`s perfect!

**Concours.John** · 10-26-2011, 08:43 PM

Originally Posted by mikenap

Looks great John. If I could make only one suggestion, the name Pontiac Enthusiast is misspelled. Otherwise, it`s perfect!

Great catch that will be fixed!

**Addicted2Bling** · 10-26-2011, 08:45 PM

Looks good, if I had the money that brochure would make me want to call you

**mrclean81** · 10-26-2011, 08:58 PM

The pic with Dennis Gage is a really nice touch. Very well thought out and put together. I like it a lot.

**C. Charles Hahn** · 10-26-2011, 09:24 PM

If it were me, I`d go for a different typeface/font and format the text blocks a little differently, but as far as the content and copy it looks great!

**Concours.John** · 10-26-2011, 09:59 PM

Originally Posted by Shiny Lil Detlr

If it were me, I`d go for a different typeface/font and format the text blocks a little differently, but as far as the content and copy it looks great!

I`m working on things. This is the first public offering. I`ve been hidden from public services.

Thank you all for review. Keep it coming.

**Concours.John** · 10-27-2011, 12:30 AM

Originally Posted by mrclean81

The pic with Dennis Gage is a really nice touch. Very well thought out and put together. I like it a lot.

That vehicle behind us was chosen as best of show, He was grand marshal. I with one other person restored it it took best of show out of 1000 cars. It ment alot. I have a the same picture with his writing sayingn"john i like your work" That means alot.

**Bunky** · 10-27-2011, 04:40 AM

Very nice brochure. I would break up the paragraph in the left most panel so there is fewer words in the paragraph to make it easier to read.

What a plug for AF!

I guess your potential clients do not use mechanical car washes so no mention of them unless I missed something.