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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    Totally agree with whoever suggested a stronger call-to-action (CTA).

    On the topic of a logo, don`t overthink it and feel like you need a pictograph/symbol or anything like that. Sometimes a simple but well-executed wordmark is all that`s needed, esp considering you have the word "detailing" in your biz name, they`ll know what you do right away
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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    Quote Originally Posted by detailermpls View Post
    Totally agree with whoever suggested a stronger call-to-action (CTA).

    On the topic of a logo, don`t overthink it and feel like you need a pictograph/symbol or anything like that. Sometimes a simple but well-executed wordmark is all that`s needed, esp considering you have the word "detailing" in your biz name, they`ll know what you do right away
    wish you would have posted this sooner lol, been working for a week now on a logo.. its almost done now. will post it up once its completed

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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    Quote Originally Posted by donbeezy View Post
    i thought about removing that package all together. no real money in just washing cars IMO
    that may be true.....but in my area, there are a lot of retirement communities where the weekly `wash only` customers are a good potential source of income......

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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    ok guys, logo is in process but i need help deciding which one

    1 is just text w/ a polisher symbol
    2 is the cord of the polisher spelling out R5... the cord lines are all wiggly, dont know how to make it look cleaner

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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    I like the first one. The second one I have to spend time making out. I don`t believe that`s a desirable trait in one`s logo.
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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    #1 looks cleaner and more professional. Would look nice on the side/rear of your mobile rig and shirts.
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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    #1 looks better...like the idea of #2 tho but agree it does make it harder to figure out what it is at a glance


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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    logo number 1, the second pic would mean nothing if you did not tell me. At a glance I don`t see "R5" at all.
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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    done. the final revision


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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    updated with all the recommendations, also tweaked some pricings. what do you guys think?

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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    got my domain name, got my email set up. next on my list is business card.

    what do you guys think? i dont know if i should just leave the text color of the info at the very bottom in plain white or the slight grey. i wanted the call to action in the middle to stand out in white


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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    Quote Originally Posted by donbeezy View Post
    ok guys, logo is in process but i need help deciding which one

    1 is just text w/ a polisher symbol
    2 is the cord of the polisher spelling out R5... the cord lines are all wiggly, dont know how to make it look cleaner

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    #2
    1st one, but get rid of the polisher
    As for the R1 package, keep it, but only do wash, spray wax and clean outside windows

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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    Quote Originally Posted by nothingface5384 View Post
    1st one, but get rid of the polisher
    As for the R1 package, keep it, but only do wash, spray wax and clean outside windows
    I ended up picking the 1st one but kept the polisher on the logo. kept the r1 package too but upped the price a little.

    I re bumped the thread for the business card I just created. thanks for your input though!

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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    Dunno how I missed this originally.............

    Me likey

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    Re: Grade my flyer/menu

    Don,

    Personally I like the white on the call to action and the slightly gray contact info, subtle. I`d leave it as long as it prints ok.

    Do you have anything on the back of the business card?

    What font are you using?

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