In general it looks pretty good. I think there are a few points you might be selling yourself short on. (not knowing you or your job that well...)
o Main telephone contact with customers and employees, answering routine inquiries and complaints. Directed complex issues to the appropriate person or department.
Maybe change to something like...
Primary contact for a diverse group of customers and employees. Duties included troubleshooting complex situations and directing the proper resources to correct problems. Also utilized my training and resources to analyze specific situations and ensure that the customer and employee needs were met or exceeded.
Another section was...
o Assisted management in all aspects, including operation and supervision of the Front-End Department.
Could be...
Worked in conjunction with the leadership team to... not sure what you did but maybe... report generating, performance measures, department goals, etc... be creative. Using the term "leadership team" is a better way to say "management".
Boring!!!....
o Reconciled cash register transactions. Deposited and transferred daily cash receipts. General bookkeeping of daily receipts also performed.
Nothing is "general", everything is complex and important. Sounds liek you balanced a checkbook, took a nap, then looked at some reciepts. Punch it up.
Completed daily tasks analyzxing sales data including cashflow both in and out of the operation. Utilized my training and resources to maximize potential and ensure that the accounting records were kept up to national standards per our operating procedure.
(ok, that might be a little much, but you get my drift... )
Utilize buzzwords like teamwork, process planning, performance management, etc... Since it`s an HR job they will be looking for both leaders and team players.
I like to use the phrase... · "Working in a team environment towards a common goal of exceeding customer expectations. " I use that in mine.
I also used... "· Utilized performance management to lead a diverse workforce to achieve consistent results"
Just punch it up a bit, and remember that nothing is easy, general, daily, typical!
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