Need critiquing of my engine detailing!

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I`ve had a lot of requests for engine detailing, but have yet to offer it since I had no experience doing them. So I decided to start practicing, and need to find out if I`m doing a decent job. This is my third one, on a little silver C class I`m going to be messing with all week. I wet the entire engine, degreased, used a spoke brush for hard to reach areas, and then rinsed. Then I used Megs PPC on the painted parts and dressed with Poly Protectant (local Car Brite Distr.). It took about an hour, is that average? Let me know what ya think, thanks!

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