Comments/suggestions on these diagrams i came up with for flyers

[2drtahoez71]

Just wanted to make sure these diagrams are aesthetically pleasing, and most importantly accurate. Any comments/suggestions are welcome.

Before:
http://www.photohost.org/gallery/data/500/43PaintDiagramBefore.jpg

After:
http://www.photohost.org/gallery/data/500/43PaintDiagramAfter.jpg

[bigron62]

very nice .. easy to understand

[Woob]

You need to make some scratches or clarify it a little. Like Fig1, little to no swirls with some contamination, Fig2, protected surface with polishes and close to perfect condition. Just stress it more :D

[2drtahoez71]

thanks guys

but woob....im not sure what you mean? I do have scratches simulated in fig. 1. And there will be a heading above the diagrams to clarify, these are just the diagrams themselves.

[Woob]

I would just make the scratches deeper in the clearcoat, but it doesn`t matter. :)

[2drtahoez71]

Originally posted by Woob
I would just make the scratches deeper in the clearcoat, but it doesn`t matter. :)
I thought that too, and it would look better for instructional purposes, but then in the after picture, there wouldnt be much clearcoat left and it would look like i stripped it all away.

[Hawaiianelement]

Looks good . its very to the point .