"poster" first draft

[MR Prime Shine]

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this is a draft any input is appreciated like wording ,pricing,picture change
etc etc,,,,,, thank you!

[Stokdgs]

The correct spelling is door Jambs, not Jams.
Dan F

[dionnfr]

I would remove the electric blower, your clients won`t care how you dry their vehicles. Just my 2 cents.

[wdmaccord]

Misspelled "trunk" on total recondition package.

[wdmaccord]

"contaminants" I think is what you want on total recondition? You have contaminates.

[wdmaccord]

for the full detail, you could maybe move the part about "for fairly clean cars" to the top to define the full detail.

[wdmaccord]

Maybe use a pic of a car in full snow foam as one of your four pictures (I`m sure a lot of people won`t know what that means...they might get it if they see a car in the pics covered in foam).

Go get `em!

[Bunky]

In maintenance wash,

you use the phrases "detailed hand wash" and "detailed safe wash". Maybe words like meticulous helps.

The purpose of the air dry really is probably a touchless dry process so I would emphasize that rather than air dry.

[Ronkh]

My opinion only.....

THe Full recondition should be by quote instead of pricing it. $450.00 may turn people off till you can talk to them and let them know whats involved etc.

[Addicted2Bling]

To make things less confusing to the customer I would put under `Full Detail`, "Includes everything in the Maintenance Detail Plus this, this and this" and then put your Clay bar and sealant. Same for the `Total Reconditioning Package`, put `Includes everything in the Full Detail Package Plus;` this way they know exactly what they are getting and why they are paying more.

[MR Prime Shine]

thanks guys i really appreciate the comments/suggestions all great ideas

[TacoHerder]

You guys are awesome!

[MR Prime Shine]

I`m waiting on the second design will post as soon as i get the rough draft

[RTexasF]

I don`t see windows mentioned anywhere. You know you do them but a potential customer won`t unless you tell them.......interior & exterior.

[MR Prime Shine]

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here`s the second draft to me all they have to change is instead of total reconditioning i told them to put extra/add on services and on the bottom where it states icar certified i told them to put i-car trained/certified and also licensed and fully insured ! other than what i want to change do you guys have any ideas or is this pretty much a go to print after the changes i mentioned