View Full Version : Advice on my CL ad?
i posted a couple funny ads a few threads down, and now that i think i am going to put an ad up on craigslist, i want it to look a little more professional.
please tell me what you think of this ad (5 mins of copy/pasting from the site)
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http://img523.imageshack.us/img523/4192/jcaddclho2.jpg
Thomas Dekany
12-13-2007, 12:59 AM
I love it!
Like the pictures as well.
tod071
12-13-2007, 01:23 AM
Looks great. Wish I could design something like for my CL ad. Very nice!
AppliedColors
12-13-2007, 01:11 PM
Looks great, but some before pics would help.
By the way, CL might start blocking a .jpg that big.
gtpaul
12-13-2007, 04:27 PM
font is too small, i had to squint to read it.
looks good otherwise
ron231
12-16-2007, 09:09 PM
Lookin good except a few things
As stated above, the font needs to be a bit bigger.
Your leather conditioning price is a bit high, offer regular leather conditioner for 20, and ultra premium for 40.
Your Super Wash needs to be reworked, do you really want to do all that for only $80?
Also, do you own an extractor? If you do, make sure you mention that in your form because a lot of cheap detailers do not have one and simply leave the soapy solution in the carpet after blotting it dry.
Chris@Optimum
12-16-2007, 10:55 PM
I really like the layout. Wording is all good. The font...ditto, maybe a little lighter blue background would make it an easier read. With that much info, maybe put a brief, abbreviated description for ppl who lose interest ez with all the details smaller underneath. JMHO. I am putting mine together now too so I will want you guys to look at mine B4 long.
Merry Christmas