critique my home page

[deadlock32]

Hey guys I`ve been working all weekend on my homepage and I was wondering you could tell me what you think. I would like to thank GTA IN DETAIL because his great website helped me create my own.



Just follow the link in my avatar.

[imported_hooked]

Pretty slick, and the big graphic of the rear of the car is cool. But...



The text is too long and not enough pictures. I started reading, but then I got bored. I know you`re trying to convey some information, but it`s too much. You need to catch the potential client`s attention and what you`re selling is how good you make cars look. I think the graphic of the car is limiting the space you have to show your product. Sorry. I know you spent a lot of effort to get everything to work with that graphic.

[deadlock32]

Pretty slick, and the big graphic of the rear of the car is cool. But...



The text is too long and not enough pictures. I started reading, but then I got bored. I know you`re trying to convey some information, but it`s too much. You need to catch the potential client`s attention and what you`re selling is how good you make cars look. I think the graphic of the car is limiting the space you have to show your product. Sorry. I know you spent a lot of effort to get everything to work with that graphic.





Actually I`ve got the space for the pics... im missing the pics. I need to get some high quality pictures of my work, which I am lacking currently. That whole left side is going to be for pics to auto scroll and if you click on it it will take you to that car`s gallery. Thanks = ]

[Thomas Dekany]

I can`t see the link.

[deadlock32]

I can`t see the link.



We are not allowed to display links here. You need to click on my avatar.

[imported_GregCavi]

stunning. i LOVE IT!!

[Joshua312]

Amazing..I love how you used that car as the main frame for all of your pages and just simply altered the color. I also like how you dont have to load the pages one by one, how it loads as a whole in the begining. Great site....just wow :)



Are you using dreamweaver or another program? Also where did you find that picture to use as your layout. Thanks!!

[deadlock32]

Amazing..I love how you used that car as the main frame for all of your pages and just simply altered the color. I also like how you dont have to load the pages one by one, how it loads as a whole in the begining. Great site....just wow :)



Are you using dreamweaver or another program? Also where did you find that picture to use as your layout. Thanks!!



The entire side created with Macro... I mean Adobe Flash. I cant find the picture i used but from from this lambo: http://articles.motortoday.com/testdrive/Murcielago/Murcielago_rear.jpg



Though I did have to photo chop it to work better as a site.

[zapata5150]

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[Joshua312]

blah auto zone detailer shabby u should of left me alone



I think your asking to be banned, keep your rude comments to yourself please

[BMWWW]

Hey, great looking site!



Some technicalities I found when looking at it with Firefox (most recent update)



1. The `Scrolling` feature does not work unless your cursor is hovering directly over the scroll bar.

2. The scrolling isnt` smooth.



Awsome site otherwise, great potential. Reading other sites, I feel that `Simpler/less is more`, and makes an easier read. Instead of making all the information available all at once, perhaps break up the more technical information to a seperate page, so there`s no information overload!



Best regards!

[Bobby G]

blah auto zone detailer shabby u should of left me alone



Maybe you need to find a new place to hang out! :rules:

[TortoiseAWD]

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[amtrak23]

I like it. Different than most websites. I agree with the one poster on less woding though. I think making the text rollovers "pop" more would be cool too. maybe have the shimmer or gleam upon initial rollover? That might be too much though.



Nice job!