Full time/part time pros - need your critique

**Zealot** · 10-04-2002, 01:11 PM

OK, long story short but since WorldCom laid me off, and the telecom market is in the sewer (way past being in the toilet), I figured there aint nothing better than working for yourself. I`ve been working on a brochure/flyer and have the front done, with the back being 90% complete. Yes there is some plagiarism from other sources on the web, but they`re nowhere near FL so I won`t be taking any business away fromthem

Lay it on me guys, and be honest in telling me what you think of the front so far. Thanks!

http://home.tampabay.rr.com/dmpatterson/brochure.jpg

**johnson** · 10-04-2002, 04:23 PM

Forbidden

You don`t have permission to access /dmpatterson/brochure.jpg on this server.

**ClayBartrug** · 10-04-2002, 04:25 PM

I see nuttin!

:nixweiss

**johnson** · 10-04-2002, 04:26 PM

This might work. You have to copy and paste.

http://web.tampabay.rr.com/dmpatterson/brochure.jpg

**Zealot** · 10-04-2002, 04:43 PM

Is there anything special I need to do so everyone can see it?

**johnson** · 10-04-2002, 04:54 PM

It must be your server. It doesnt let you post or link anything.

**Zealot** · 10-04-2002, 05:31 PM

Click here and go to the bottom of the page. I put a link there. My picture at the top is fubar, but I`ll fix that later. Thanks guys:up

**Zealot** · 10-04-2002, 07:21 PM

Originally posted by BlackRegal

DP-Jedi... I like it. I think it has a nice crisp look and is well organized. Your "motto" is pretty good, actually got me to crack a smile. Is that original? Sucks to hear about the layoff by the way. Hopefully your business takes off for you.:up

Wow thanks!! I`m not clever enough to think up a motto like that on my own. I vaguely remember seeing it somewhere on this forum and tucked it away in my memory for future reference

Dave

**Nagchampa** · 10-04-2002, 11:52 PM

It`s very good. Only thing I would do is include some close-up photos of parts of your car eg. wheel/tire, upholstery, hood reflection, etc. But you have that whole other side of the brochure to work with. Good luck with the biz, I hope to be doing the same shortly.