newe website up

[toyotaguy]

Link removed. -- Tort

I need some critiquing.....

so far i have gotten contructive criticism in the following areas...

gallery page pics are not hyper linked to larger ones (fixing when I get my laptop back from repairs)
gallery page word art is hard to read - changing to make it more ledgible
(do you think the process is important on the gallery page... this BMW received "...." detail?)
the services page - it lined up in my publisher but didnt on the website, so I have to fix that, but what about the boxes being scattered? good or bad?
what about the headers on the top of each pages, some like it some don't.
Rates page - should I hyper link to the service page on each car price? it is already hyperlinked at the discalimer below it....

constructive criticism is very welcomed as this was my first website I ever tried to put together. There will be constant updates obviously, but any advise is welcomed. I saw some puncuation errors that I over looked, so no need to list those (family members' and friends' cars - forgot the apostrophies!)

thanks

eric

[Grouse]

link?
i don't see one

[Joshua312]

I have a feeling this thread will be closed if your link is supplied...there have been a lot of threads lately with people's websites directly linked for help in what they should do to make it better, and the threads are often locked because they are going against the rules. Sorry we cant be of any help probably Without posting your link, you may want to ask if there is anyone who knows what they are talking about if they would help you and you could pm them your website address? This might work...

From what I seen quickly glancing at it, your homepage, where you have the product picture - I think it would be cool if you got a picture of all your products sitting in front of a car that you detailed with you in the picture as well, might make it a little more personal without showing us your products in your room I'll keep looking at it! I like the navigation, its easy to navigate around

[TortoiseAWD]

I had to remove the link. If you want people to check out your homepage, place the URL in your profile, then direct people to check your profile for the link. That keeps the forum free from commercial links, but still gives you a way to give your homepage URL to others.

Thanks,
Tort
(moderator)

[toyotaguy]

oh ok, sorry about that....if anyone would like to provide some feedback, plase look in my profile and go to the site, look it over and give me your input via PM....thanks