A little pkg i put together for a local elementary school.

JRock10 · 10-10-07, 11:30

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Eakin Elementary Faculty and Staff

Are you too busy to clean up your own car? How about this? Pristine Detail will come to Eakin and do it for you! Who is Pristine Detail and how is it affiliated with Eakin, you may ask? The company was formed by Jason Gardiner, Pristine has developed packages especially for Eakin faculty and is happy to present them here.

Principal’s List: Includes a wash, vacuum, and windows cleaned. Also included in this package: Dash and console cleaned and dressed, wheels cleaned and tires dressed, wheelwells dressed, carpet mats shampooed, leather seats wiped and dressed (cloth upholstery will be vacuumed and spot cleaned), and a shine enhancing buff wax will be applied by machine to your car. All for the value price of $75.00

Honor Roll: Includes a wash, vacuum, and windows cleaned. Also included this package: Dash and console cleaned and dressed, wheels and tires cleaned and dressed, a quick spray wax will also be applied. All of this done to your car for $40.00

In-service: Includes a wash, vacuum, and windows cleaned. Tires will be dressed and wheels cleaned. $25.00

Early Dismissal: Includes exterior wash and wipe down, tires will be dressed. $15.00

Please contact me or xxxxxxxxx to confirm a time for your car to be cared for, then make your selection and place the form and your keys in the basket provided at the front office. If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to ask myself (contacts are on the business card attached) or X. We appreciate your business!

Name______________________________________________ _____________________

Make/Model/Color_____________________________________________ ___________

Principal’s List________ Honor Roll________ In-service________ Early Dismissal________
Please add $10 for large SUV (Suburban, Tahoe, Expedition, etc.)

it has been edited a bit for privacy.

mr.ikon · 10-10-07, 11:57

hahaha. pretty cool.

JRock10 · 10-11-07, 12:14

thanks. i thought it was.

mirrorfinishman · 10-11-07, 03:46

Unless you include information about your million dollar liability insurance policy, (just in case someone slips and falls due to the wet pavement caused by your wash water) you may receive a failing grade on this package.

imageautodetail · 10-11-07, 03:59

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Originally Posted by mirrorfinishman

Unless you include information about your million dollar liability insurance policy, (just in case someone slips and falls due to the wet pavement caused by your wash water) you may receive a failing grade on this package.

true, I always note our insurance on any type of marketing, gives the customer some reassurance

todd@bsaw · 10-11-07, 03:30

I cannot stand the term "buff wax". I've seen other detailers use it and it annoys me to no end.

David Fermani · 10-11-07, 04:09

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Originally Posted by JRock10

Principal’s List: Includes a wash, vacuum, and windows cleaned. Also included in this package: Dash and console cleaned and dressed, wheels cleaned and tires dressed, wheelwells dressed, carpet mats shampooed, leather seats wiped and dressed (cloth upholstery will be vacuumed and spot cleaned), and a shine enhancing buff wax will be applied by machine to your car. All for the value price of $75.00

Wow - A complete detail for $75. Seems really cheap for your best package. How much are your competitors charging?

JRock10 · 10-11-07, 07:59

don't know that i'd call that a complete detail.

JRock10 · 10-11-07, 10:00

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Originally Posted by todd@bsaw

I cannot stand the term "buff wax". I've seen other detailers use it and it annoys me to no end.

would you give me a better suggestion for layman's terms to get across the point that i'm going to use an AIO product applied with a PC to your car? I tried to keep the wording in terms that someone that doesn't do this everyday would understand. If I was advertising to a bunch of Autopians, I would definitly use different terminolgy and be a little more industry specific. Since this was a flyer that was put in teacher's mailboxes at school, i didn't have the chance to give a face to face sales pitch or go into explanation of the processes. Also, this is by no means the extent of my services. I am trying to set up a bi-weekly regular setup that I can generate some revenue and knock out a few quick jobs at one time. If i did 7 $40 pkgs and 2 or 3 $15 washes, I'm looking at $325 bucks and done by 3:30 in the afternoon. The first day, i had 3 cars total. Not overwhelming, but it was good response to the first time out.