Catch Lines for business cards

6']['9 · 09-09-04, 07:59

I've noticed some if not most have catch phrases at the bottom of the card. Im trying to think of something that will get the customers attention but i dont want to come off too cocky but yet something that says try my services.. Any suggestions
Thanks

DetailGirl · 09-09-04, 08:45

I have magnets on the car that say
Wish your car shined like mine?
Then the name and number and at the bottom it says
Your car is a reflection of you, call us. We'll make you flawless
Same on the business cards

mirrorfinishman · 09-09-04, 09:16

I focus quite a bit of my attention on marketing to antique and classic car owners. I frequent many of the local car shows and cruise nights. And I offer my knowledge and experience, regarding detailing and basic appearance maintenance, to many of the car clubs as a guest speaker. Due to my involvement with collector cars I have the following line on my business cards. 'Specialize In Antique & Classic Cars'

It may not be the best catch phrase out there, but I think it helps to define the caliper of my work. My thought is that when my regular customers read that phrase they may start to think that if he specializes in taking care of expensive collector cars, then our daily driver would surely be safe with him. It's just a way to create an image of how you would like to be viewed. Hey, it's worked so far. And I am getting ready to order more business cards and I am going to keep that phrase right where it is.

6']['9 · 09-10-04, 07:13

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[i] My thought is that when my regular customers read that phrase they may start to think that if he specializes in taking care of expensive collector cars, then our daily driver would surely be safe with him. It's just a way to create an image of how you would like to be viewed. Hey, it's worked so far. And I am getting ready to order more business cards and I am going to keep that phrase right where it is. [/b]

thats what im trying to accomplish but its annoying trying to sit here and do it

i guess if i dont worry about it, it will probably come to me when i least expect it.

AMDin93103 · 09-10-04, 08:22

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Originally posted by 6']['9
i guess if i dont worry about it, it will probably come to me when i least expect it.

My best ideas come to me when I am sleeping. Think about it for a while, take a nap and it will probably come to you.

-Stu.

TechSol · 09-10-04, 11:54

I came up with my name and slogan when I was asleep (more trying to go to sleep) so I got up, wrote it down, and sure enough I almost had forgot hte next morning, so I was glad I did lol.

My catch line I came up with in my sleep isn't the best, but it's "competitive prices, superior results."

Crimson · 09-12-04, 07:34

I thought of mine when I was sitting back watching TV.

"A Great Shine, The First Time"

I like Detailgirls' : "Your car is a reflection of you, call us. We'll make you flawless"

DetailGirl · 09-12-04, 09:43

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Originally posted by Crimson
I thought of mine when I was sitting back watching TV.

"A Great Shine, The First Time"

I like Detailgirls' : "Your car is a reflection of you, call us. We'll make you flawless"

Thanks! I was rather proud of it too lol. I actually had a marketing person in our building call me and ask if I had come up with it on my own lol. She said I should be in marketing, I said hire me! But no marketing background =(

mirrorfinishman · 09-12-04, 06:25

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