Advice on my CL ad?

JBs · 12-12-07, 10:43

i posted a couple funny ads a few threads down, and now that i think i am going to put an ad up on craigslist, i want it to look a little more professional.

please tell me what you think of this ad (5 mins of copy/pasting from the site)

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tdekany · 12-12-07, 10:59

I love it!

Like the pictures as well.

tod071 · 12-12-07, 11:23

Looks great. Wish I could design something like for my CL ad. Very nice!

AppliedColors · 12-13-07, 11:11

Looks great, but some before pics would help.

By the way, CL might start blocking a .jpg that big.

gtpaul · 12-13-07, 02:27

font is too small, i had to squint to read it.

looks good otherwise

ron231 · 12-16-07, 07:09

Lookin good except a few things

As stated above, the font needs to be a bit bigger.
Your leather conditioning price is a bit high, offer regular leather conditioner for 20, and ultra premium for 40.
Your Super Wash needs to be reworked, do you really want to do all that for only $80?
Also, do you own an extractor? If you do, make sure you mention that in your form because a lot of cheap detailers do not have one and simply leave the soapy solution in the carpet after blotting it dry.

integritydetail · 12-16-07, 08:55

I really like the layout. Wording is all good. The font...ditto, maybe a little lighter blue background would make it an easier read. With that much info, maybe put a brief, abbreviated description for ppl who lose interest ez with all the details smaller underneath. JMHO. I am putting mine together now too so I will want you guys to look at mine B4 long.

Merry Christmas