Please Critique My New Website!!!

EMIN007 · 10-24-09, 09:33

Hello everyone,
just finished putting together my website and wanted to see if I can get some ideas, suggestion and comments on how I can improve it or make it more visually intising! Keep in mind I did all the design by myself using a program called Wix. Thanks for any ideas to improve!
Thanks and have a great day!!!

attention 2 detailing index page

Jean-Claude · 10-24-09, 10:16

I like the design of the site over all. I like how it swaps out pages. The script for the gallery is great.

"Trust in me once...." needs to be lower cased. It's in the middle of the sentence.

On the services page you need to capitalize "Fully" to keep it uniform with the rest of the page.

I think you should break up the font style a little on the home page.

You need to title your pages so that the site gets indexed by Google better.

brwill2005 · 10-24-09, 11:39

Honestly, it does not look very good. All of your pictures are stock photos. The overall design looks very amateurish. I would try to find a good template and go from there. Also, claiming to be LA's best is a big statement. There are a lot of really good detailing companies in and around LA. If you do feel your the best, your website should reflect it.

EcoAutoCT · 10-24-09, 12:56

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Originally Posted by brwill2005

Honestly, it does not look very good. All of your pictures are stock photos. The overall design looks very amateurish. I would try to find a good template and go from there. Also, claiming to be LA's best is a big statement. There are a lot of really good detailing companies in and around LA. If you do feel your the best, your website should reflect it.

+1, site needs more attention to detail.

EMIN007 · 10-25-09, 12:05

Thank you so much for the suggestions so far!!!