How's my new business card? feedback please.

SR20det · 05-14-09, 08:56

Okay, so I only detail on the side. It is my hobby and have about 10 years experience and have been doing it on the side for about 4 years. I do work for friends of friends, co-workers etc. So... As of late, I have been getting referrals and many want business cards to pass on my name. I whipped this up tonight to get opinions.

Let me know what you think. I appreciate constructive criticism.

craigdt · 05-14-09, 09:50

Not bad at all. Your contact info may show up better if it were on the left side however.

Setec Astronomy · 05-14-09, 10:16

You state: "Cleaning. Correcting and Protecting Automotive Finishes"

Did you put the period in after cleaning on purpose, to denote the end of the thought? Or was that supposed to be a comma? Otherwise I think it's good.

SR20det · 05-15-09, 04:09

Thanks for the comments... it is a comma in "cleaning, correcting..." but I guess it does look like a period. I made some changes, does this look better?

ohiostate · 05-15-09, 05:38

Think ur contact information maybe should be in white...

PTRon · 05-15-09, 05:40

I like the 2nd one better but put back the comma(s).
Cleaning comma Correcting comma and...

jmkiang · 05-15-09, 06:18

I like. Need to come up with something for myself this weekend since I am being asked for them too.

Good luck!

Setec Astronomy · 05-15-09, 06:25

Yeah, put the comma back in, just make sure it looks like a comma, lol!

Twista616 · 05-15-09, 06:35

Maybe a company name would help, or a name where people would remember you.

ohiostate · 05-15-09, 09:09

Quote:

Originally Posted by Twista616

Maybe a company name would help, or a name where people would remember you.

Agree.................

jmkiang · 05-15-09, 10:37

I think you can / should take Automotive Finishes out.

todd@bsaw · 05-15-09, 10:48

Yes, I like the Oxford comma.

However, if you're not going to be operating under a business name (or DBA), make your name the point of focus and not 'Automotive Detailing'. Be personal and have clients know you by name, that's how my business is founded.