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Old 06-12-09, 09:43   #10 (permalink)
todd@bsaw
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Re: Critique the website above you...

Jake,
Glad you're updating your site soon. I think everyone on here has a site that is in some sort of adjustment. I have tons of things I'd like to change on my site, but just don't have the time anymore to do it.

As for your current site:
- I agree about the Porsche image on the front page... looks too "hey! i'm new to photoshop and filters are fun!"
- Menu links disappear on hover (white text on white background)
- The formatting on your 'Services' page is all over the place and needs an urgent adjustment.
- I like the Gallery content... but again... poor formatting.
- "What is Detailing?" Great content! (and lots that I stole/borrowed/adapted for my site... sorry, I've been meaning to change that but haven't gotten around to it).

Suggestions:
More prominently display your contact info on your front page. There is lots of blank space that could be used. Update your banner/logo. Make parts of your site easier to find... ("How much is a wash?")
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