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Old 06-12-09, 07:41   #4 (permalink)
Jakerooni
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Re: Websites

Ummm...mmmmmm???? Ok what I see that I don't like... The whole link to the google doc page for prices.. You can obviously put text on the site. So do it that way. Don't make people link all over the place to figure out what they are going to be charged. 2nd.. The about us page... Either re-do the entire thing or get rid off it all together. You come across as very amaturish with you're statements of semi-pro results (if you're operating as a business you're a pro weather or not you have pro skills or not) Don't tell your customers you don't know what you're doing. It won't help your cause. Then having titles like "Senior Detailer" with all of you guys having a combined total of 6 years experience. So what you each have 6 months under you're belts? See where I'm getting at here. That whole page just makes you look bad.

I do like the scrolling photo-album on the front page. Get some better pics in there and it'll really stand out. The load times between pages seems aweful long though. Not sure if it's the site or something on my end. The rest of the site looks pretty clean and straight forward though. Not a bad start.
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