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todd@bsaw · 05-15-09, 10:48

Yes, I like the Oxford comma.

However, if you're not going to be operating under a business name (or DBA), make your name the point of focus and not 'Automotive Detailing'. Be personal and have clients know you by name, that's how my business is founded.

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todd@bsaw Registered User todd@bsaw is offline Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Fox Valley, WI Posts: 886	Re: How's my new business card? feedback please. Yes, I like the Oxford comma. However, if you're not going to be operating under a business name (or DBA), make your name the point of focus and not 'Automotive Detailing'. Be personal and have clients know you by name, that's how my business is founded. __________________ - Todd Schmidt - Auto Reconditioning Specialist and Master of Shine TS Detailing Wisconsin's Premier Mobile Detailing Specialist