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Re: Comments on my website?
Not bad, not bad. The one thing that puts me off is the repeated use of "I" in the "About Me" section. Even if you're a one man operation, consider using the Royal "we" instead. It sounds/looks more professional. If you're not comfortable doing that, just reword the section so you don't start off as many sentences with it. Good work, though. I'm in the process of making a website as well. It's a lot of work, but fun, too.
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Will
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