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Old 04-20-09, 01:29   #4 (permalink)
D Tailor
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Edit your Punctuation in your About Me

I really do have a passion for automotive detailing. I became a member of several auto detailing forums back in 2003, when I got my first car to learn how to keep it looking as good as the day it left the factory. When others started to ask how I kept mine so clean, and what kind of wax did I use, I realized there was a void in proper automotive detailing and reconditioning in the Wake Forest/Raleigh area. I realized that anyone can wash a car, but it would take some skill and experience to make the car truly look like it has that “Showroom Shine.

I have a fixed location in Youngsville, NC; and, I also offer mobile detailing (water and electric must be provided). I am more than just a detailer or someone that will simply “wash” your car. I detail every auto asif it were mine. I use advanced procedures such as the 2 bucket wash (will not induce any swirls in the paint) and proper car polishing (removing, not hiding the swirl marks). I also use high end (remove chemicals: eco-verbage)products to get the job done. On any given day I will be using products from Zaino, Poorboys, Meguiars, Optimum, Menzerna, Ultima, FK1 USA, Cobra and Pinnacle. Many of these products are imported and produce superior results to the “common” offerings found at ______.

If you are in need of a “Showroom Shine Detail”, give me a call today to discuss ________.

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Not reading too far into your site or commenting on design, I looked at the page that says the most about you: ""About Me". I always think this page should be super tight and reflect you as precisely as possible. So, I took the liberty of detailing the page for you. I didn't mess with any of your content (maybe just some wording) because only you know yourself and what you want to sell yourself as, but I added and changed some punctuation and also changed some words. Let me know if you have any questions. PS: I hate exclamation points.
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